Hey its think again, tired of long posts so ill just do point forms =):
1.) Good use of imagery again, you captured the innocence of the whale.And your comparison between its gentleness and size makes it seem like the gentle giant it really is.
2.)I always enjoy your poems.
3.) favourite lines:
-Being alive
And breathing-
In pockets
And bubbles
And moments of consciousness
9/10 another great poem, hope to read more of you work soon
Points: 890
Reviews: 29
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